I'm here on behalf of because your piece was in the 'Critique Requested' folder. In all honesty, the piece is visually stunning. The concept is unique and original; you were able to apply the bokeh in a whimsical but not overused way. The clarity of the picture on the camera screen contrasts beautifully with the blotted out background, so your camera/main focal point is nicely highlighted. Although the sky/horizon lightens the picture up a bit, it distracts a little from the focal point, so either shifting the whole piece down or waiting until it gets a shade darker outside would pull the eye back to the camera. Overall though, the piece is attracts my eye and shows the use of bokeh and DOF in a whole new light.
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It is an honor!!